Documentary Comments

 Lizzy and Chavana: 

It was really good, the editing and extra clips looked great! I wish there was more voice over or music in the background during the video. I learned a lot about Golf and the tips that were given to us. I liked the title slides they did in between each section. I finally learned why golfers work out as much as they do. 

Raven and I:

Watching it back today I could've edited the lighting to make it not as white washed. We could've added some words and cut some scenes down a little bit, but I really like how the process was showed and how relaxing the video came across. 

Marisa and Hannah:

I really liked how they did the interview with their coach. The transitions were clean and nice as well. I like the balance between the talking and the music, maybe they could've added the music underneath and just had the music very low underneath to give it more connectedness. I like how they showed real footage from the practices and games. 

Patrick:

I really liked the voice over he added to the photos, it showed how others thought of him. I loved how he kept the music underneath the speaking and clips it made it feel more together. I wish the photos he had in there were more clear and not as grainy. 

Austin:

I liked how he took videos from other colleges and tied it into his own work. I wished he had fixed the audio problem with the music being to loud over him speaking. I loved how he explained how his/ a baseball team is a family. I loved how he added the quote into his film, it really helped solidify the meaning of the film.